A small excerpt from the editing I’ve been doing tonight for the re-release of Breathtaker, now that my vision for the series is more fleshed-out and I know just how I want this one to lead into the sequels, and so it will be worthy of the sequels that follow in its footsteps… (I suppose you could say the first edition of Breathtaker was a mere experiment, and now I’m revamping it to be a more official, grand, polished series.)
Anyway, the excerpt, which at this point is shorter than the rest of this post has been:
Sometimes, the glistening of the water had a sound about it. Like windchimes. A million gleaming shards lapping against one another. A great, churning, liquid mosaic.